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Re: Green Tree chapter one
This story caught my attention. It really did. I am a fan of these kind of stories. I might suggest, though, the use of more comas, in my opinion. And ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: The Beginning
I think this story is a really good one, but I feel like its really familiar to me for some reason. I'm not sure about that. But I do think ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: School
This poem explains a lot, and is very true. You did a great job. :mrgreen:
Mar 30, 2010