wasp92277

sounds intresting and has a very philosophical point of view but i do have to say that honestly i didn't like it one bit especially when medicine is claimed as ...

Writers block is something every writer can relate to and I especially love the way you had written every word to describe how hard it is to write even a ...

sheer force of awesomeness.....not " force of sheer awesomeness" I found your story quite similiar and not very original to other stories i have read in the past. Your story ...

Definetly very catchy and a thrilling ride :) the poem is well written and as for the grammer.....i don't see any mistakes...yet. Keep up the good work and NEVER give ...

this is by far the best piece i have read all summer your writing style is very intriguing and your grammer is all put together very well my favorite part ...

there are a lot of good and bad things about your piece 1. You're John not Timmy 2. The comedy and setting still need more fixing......i honestly don't think you ...

very strong imagery and word usage i felt every word that was written on my screen though it is very brilliant....there is one thing i would fix the last stanza ...

Story was pulling on the heartstrings from childhood memories to present tense Though it was strong in the emotional department, it lacked originality and creativity. One must conquer this in ...