walshie

Don't listen to all the negative things, I really liked your poem. It wasn't perfect, but it was venting your sorrow. Who cares that it's about a chicken? Just because ...

wow, this reads like a fall out boy song, the words are powerful and I understand what you're getting at (That's a big compliment, I love those guys =]) I ...

I really liked this, the isolation that they feel is really strong :). Favourite line: I get inside their heads Yet they don’t know I exist And I save their ...

Wow, this was really powerful and I enjoyed it =) Couldn't see anything wrong with it tbh. Perhaps you are a demon, a succubus, a hedonistic devil, slowly, quenching your ...

This was a good poem but I think the rhyming could do with a little work. He sheath his sword and stabbed my brother. Holstered his gun and shot my ...

This poem was so emotional it made me strangely happy. It was so well-written and the rhyming was spot-on. Your love was like a vine It wouldn’t let me go, ...