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Re: The Battle. Chapter 5.
It needs more character description, to give the reader an idea of what someone looks like Ninth paragraph down: he shot me instead of short. Fourteenth paragraph down: body's should ...
Jul 13, 2014
It needs more character description, to give the reader an idea of what someone looks like Ninth paragraph down: he shot me instead of short. Fourteenth paragraph down: body's should ...
Jul 13, 2014
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