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Dear cupcake, Peacocks is a very cute poem! And I have the faintest idea that, you already love peacocks. Anyways, There is just one teensy mistake you made. C- Can ...

Dear cupcake, You poem is great. Even though your poem is short, It makes a lot of sense, And your poem is in, the future tense. I know my poem ...

Dear Kaitlin, Your narrative poem is excellent, but I do think that you could do a little better. And try and make it easier for people to understand what your ...

Hey everyone! this is the second chapter to my novel called Nature's Elements .This is my first story to Young Writer's Society, so since it's my first try, I hope ...

Dear TheWalkinDude, Your story was really funny. I liked it a lot, but I think you should notice a one thing I saw when reading your story. It was going ...

Dear the doctor, My name is VStarfirix. As much as I have read of your story, it is very good. But, I have a lot of questions to ask you. ...

Dear Ilovebubbles123, My name is VStarfirix. As much as I have read of your story, it is very good. But, I have a lot of questions to ask you. I ...

This Chapter one. If you haven't read the Prologue, please try not to read this one. You might not understand. Read the Prologue! Chapter One: Eavesdropping The next morning, Laura ...

Dear yasminahmed, My name is VStarfirix. As much as I have read of your short story, it is very good. But, I have a lot of questions to ask you. ...

Dear TedusCloud, My name is VStarfirix. As much as I have read of your short story, it is very good. But, I have a lot of questions to ask you. ...

This is the Prologue of my novel called 'Nature's Elements'. Hope you like it! I know, I know. It's very small...but please read and review. When you finish reading this ...

Well, I don't know really what to say, but I guess I can say this story is..... AWESOME!