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I hope that you all liked the new way that I am writing in. From now onwards, everything will be written in Lesley's point of view. If you don't like ...

Chapter Four: Arual turns into a monster (This chapter is in Lesley’s point of view) I was sitting on the sofa reading an abridged version of The War of the ...

Dear Jai, In your review, you have noted that Sophie can't know all of those things. It's simple. In the next chapter or so, I have clearly noted out that ...

Dear Ashley529, Your lyrics were good, but before you ever write the lyrics of a song, you will have to write the Artist, too so that people can understand who ...

Dear SweetMoments, Your picture is pretty good! I can't really ever draw anything impressive on the computer except a few girls. I think I will try for this, but I ...

Hello everyone! This is the third chapter of my story, Nature’s Elements. If you have read my before chapters, you will probably understand what is going on right now. But ...

Hello, your sister here. I spotted the first line and I think it's a mistake. Please remember the 'think' there if it isn't. Kaito dropped soundlessly to his knees, all ...

Dear RachaelElg, Please read my chapters if you have the time! Thanks (If you do)! Well, I guess I should tell you a little about my novel first. My novel's ...

Oi, it's you sister here. Your story is great and everything, but there is one thing wrong with it. It's too much like James Patterson' s series, Maximum Ride. Don't ...

Dear Warrior Princess, Your poem is just great! I love it! By everything I have read till now in this poem, I can guess that you are a Christian, aren't ...

Dear AlexBlack, Your story idea is really good, but you, could add a little bit of information in the beginning, like where the main character was and where she was ...

Dear LisaMCooper, I agree with songbird102. The overall story is great but the words get jumbled at times and is hard to understand. Anyways it's great and I hope that ...

Dear Kaitlin, Your poem is great! Continue writing poems like this. There is no punctuation mistake, but like TheWalkinDude said, it's best to avoid the question mark, if you are ...

Dear theotherone, Your pictures are amazing! I wonder how you succeeded in making them so realistic! My favorite is the third one. It shows that you have a wild imagination ...

Dear TheMadcap, Your story doesn't really make any sense, like bro has said, and there are many ways you can use to improve it, like correcting your grammar. Here's a ...