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Re: An Illusory Game
Thank you! I didn't say what country they were in because I had put it underneath "Chapter One"--it is supposed to take place in Paris in 1924. I had thought ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Morbid Insulation
It sounds beautiful, and you are a very eloquent speaker, but i can't decipher it.
Apr 22, 2006 -
Re: Silence (Read+Review!)
Thank you very much for critiqueing-- oh, shoot, I forgot how to spell that. Anyway... To be honest, I have to admit that I didn't even think about the title. ...
Apr 21, 2006 -
Re: quietus on an Aegean Urn
It sounds really beautiful... it flows.
Apr 20, 2006 -
Re: Failed Flirtation
It's very good, although I think it could have been worded a little better. Sorry, I can't tell you where to start with that. It would be a lot better ...
Apr 20, 2006 -
Re: Someday when I am a stand up comedian... DONT READ THIS!
Are you a gangster or something? It's kind of repetitive, but if you tuned up the places starting with 'S' thing, it could work. It's not worded very well, but ...
Apr 20, 2006 -
Re: Writing Challenge 4/03 "A Simple Rebellion"
First of all, thank you, THANK YOU for correcting it. Let me explain myself on a few things: There is grass on beaches. The reason I didn't just dive into ...
Apr 12, 2006 -
Re: The Rose
Some of it seems a little awkward and run-on but I really do love the last stanza.
Apr 9, 2006 -
Re: A love story.
Good, although it seems a bit run-on.
Apr 9, 2006