volleychik992

Thank you! I didn't say what country they were in because I had put it underneath "Chapter One"--it is supposed to take place in Paris in 1924. I had thought ...

Chapter One Paris, 1924 “Give us this day our daily bread… and lead us not into temptation, but deliver us from evil.” The empty words echoed across gilded frames surrounding ...

Thank you so much. I have had writer's block on this for so long... but that's a really good one. Any more suggestions?

I edited my first post--it came out as a much different request, because I was reluctant to give specifics on my story. Weird habit.

I have everything planned out in my story, except for one essential thing. I need an object that would relate to the Paris Opera, something very valuable either sentimentally or ...

Fantastic.

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It sounds beautiful, and you are a very eloquent speaker, but i can't decipher it.

If you really focused on the 'father's' problems, i.e, what exactly is going on inside his head that had convinced himself so surely that this girl is his daughter (previous ...

I have written about the Notre Dame already-- I'll PM you the first paragraph on my story... just, if you know any details...

Thank you very much for critiqueing-- oh, shoot, I forgot how to spell that. Anyway... To be honest, I have to admit that I didn't even think about the title. ...

I feel sorry for Jon Stewart because he must be feeling upstaged by Stephen Colbert. I mean, no one could NOT be upstaged by Stephen Colbert.

A Deafening Silence 'Never' has a sound. Its voice is loud and echoing But it cannot distinguish itself Out of many other nothings. Whirling, Swirling, bloodred. The sickening sound of ...

It sounds really beautiful... it flows.

It's very good, although I think it could have been worded a little better. Sorry, I can't tell you where to start with that. It would be a lot better ...