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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Complexity of Death

    Thanks! I have redone my first two paragraphs , and now it looks so much better.

    Nov 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Complexity of Death

    Thank you so much. I would like to to try to make it a novel. Do you have any tips for that?

    Nov 25, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Character profile

    Bravo! Very thorough profiling. I think, since he is so rude, that he should be very sarcastic as well.

    Nov 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Black Pendragon Prologue

    Wow! You are an amazing writer. I would happily read more.

    Nov 25, 2011


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