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[i]really sorry for the rhyming and punctuation i have alot of trouble with those two things...[/i] :? Behind the scenes where none can see, Behind the scenes just you and ...

it's good but it seems like it's written in two halves that have been a little bit carelessly combined but then again mabye it's just me...

wonderfully portrayed i can really relate to this poem too overall five stars

i'm afraid i have to agree with kioneslayer it lacks emphisis it's a wonderful piece of work though, i enjoyed reading it