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Also, in the new section that I added, do I use the word "I" too much, and is the general situation odd. Do you think she's too trusting of the ...

Thank you! I really love long comments! Oh, and sorry about my grammar, still taking English. : )

I'm not sure if you've read the description or not, but if you haven't can you please tell me if the description of the man in chapter 1 is awkward ...