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  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Infusion

    This is extremely thorough and really helpful. Thank you so much for this! Definitely gonna go back over it with these edits :D as for the flashback at the end ...

    Jul 7, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: Nature

    Good to me is.... difficult to explain properly haha. I believe in a balance of rationality and faith in the human spirit and I think true good can't really be ...

    Jul 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: Explanation of Color for the Blind

    The premise is beautiful and thought-provoking.... Thing I like about this poem is that it's familiar but it's ALL about the story. The style is straightforwards, the content yells at ...

    Jul 4, 2013


grammar is hard and i dislike it immensely
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