vkshravi88

Great poem! I've never reviewed one of your works but I can tell you're experienced and strong haha. I'm going to ignore the grammar stuff actually because while it's important ...

OK so there's a couple things you can do here. One thing (this is something I point out often) is the spacing. Believe it or not the effectiveness of the ...

The premise is absolutely amazing. There's very little you could do to improve this, even if you scavenge for the slightest details.The writing style is one of the best I've ...

HEY! first off thanks for reviewing the work I posted today :D OK so I think the strongest portion of your poem is the actual premise. It seemed conformed at ...

This just made my day lol. I've never seen a poem like this before and I absolutely love this. When I read poems I have sort of a subconscious classification ...

Ok so the best part of this for me was the second half. The story is really good, and you turned something really cliche into something that doesn't look cliche ...

The best part of this is the vocab. The way you combine something so complex makes an image I hardly ever see writers make. This is a beautiful piece, nice ...