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“How are you? Dear one Have you been alright?” “Missing you Like always Couldn’t wait until tonight” “The stars look beautiful Even better than before” “I don’t see a change ...

She came into my life Unintentionally, just because That’s what I thought of our friendship Until my soul was forced to love She was younger to me By just a ...

What is a lie? The progeny of Satan The master of deception An intentional misconception What is a lie? Knives in form of words For once said they do hurt ...

There once was a buzzing Insect And his name was Git He was a roaming, toddling, wonderful thing And he left zits whenever he bit One day little Git Was ...

I am a person of many worlds You see me all the time I travel back and forth they say To the end of all life I am not a ...

OK so there's a couple things you can do here. One thing (this is something I point out often) is the spacing. Believe it or not the effectiveness of the ...

The premise is absolutely amazing. There's very little you could do to improve this, even if you scavenge for the slightest details.The writing style is one of the best I've ...

Urgency. It flew in the air, gliding around the pitter and the patter of random, uncoordinated feet. He couldn’t see anything. He could barely feel. The siren continued to moan ...

HEY! first off thanks for reviewing the work I posted today :D OK so I think the strongest portion of your poem is the actual premise. It seemed conformed at ...

This just made my day lol. I've never seen a poem like this before and I absolutely love this. When I read poems I have sort of a subconscious classification ...

What is life? There's always at least one point when everyone asks themself this question, and everyone's answers are always different in some way, but always similar in some way. ...

Ok so the best part of this for me was the second half. The story is really good, and you turned something really cliche into something that doesn't look cliche ...

The best part of this is the vocab. The way you combine something so complex makes an image I hardly ever see writers make. This is a beautiful piece, nice ...

A little girl walks away From a world she grew up in While her father is upstairs, up there Being caressed somewhere in heaven He left her unintentionally Not meaning ...