vivien

Thanks Quilboar, glad you liked it

thanks for the review! really helped and I'm glad you liked the idea. Thanks for reading, ~vivien

never mind, got it

right, thanks--how do I edit this?

thanks sarahnsnow, I'm glad you liked it

Thanks for the review magpie! it did help me out. I agree, I should describe the surroundings but I think the reason it turned out this way is because this ...

I like how you made me think nothing should have an ending. I enjoyed your work and hope to see more like this, ~vivien