victorydance

I liked your internal rhyme on line five. it added more to the poem and helped it flow better! You used a few near rhymes, which you totally pulled off. ...

nice! it flowed very well. It's got a very nice rhythm to it. I can tell exactly how you feel about God and it's always nice to know we all ...

My first attempt at a poem. Here you go, world. I break away from the monotony of apathy this moment of eradication of my feelings takes dedication; a hopeless mission ...

hey, I care about you! I know where you're coming from though. everyone feels like this at one point. but you're not worthless or anything. Obviously you're pretty talented at ...

I like your use of metaphors. I specifically like how you compared death to a stalker. although that may be slightly cliché, it's pretty accurate. We often don't know it's ...

wow, that was pretty dark. It was written very well, though. I can also see this poem as song lyrics, too. Your words have a nice ring to them. They ...

This was excellent! After first reading it, your poem kind of reminded me of the song Imagine by John Lennon. I really liked the lines "To compare to the verses/chisled ...

That was awesome! it's a new approach at expressing frustration. how DO we know what love is? If only we really could write a letter to our hearts from our ...

I really like this! I think everyone can relate to this at some point in their lives.