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Thank you so much. I really love the piece too. Hopefully, try to put the stanza breaks in my next.

Thank you so much. I will put the stanza breaks in my next. I appreciate the review

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Nice review,thank you for reading it.I did it as part of my advocacy

Thank you

Yeah I will fix that.Thank you for reviewing it.

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ooh for real the piece is good

The entire piece is lovely.starting from the start,I felt the persona words how she had to change herself.I also would like the appreciation and awareness of the trap and change ...

The entire piece is lovely.starting from the start,I felt the persona words how she had to change herself.I also would like the appreciation and awareness of the trap and change ...

It is a nice piece you have featured emotions strongly and the words sync with the message

That is a deep story and I hope that it gets to the world.Christians should not be persecuted