victorianlolita

Kafka it might be wise to read all of my posts on here before putting crap up. Thank you for making my decision on leaving final

Thank you. I did not take that into consideration. It was also reminded to me in a message that the hatemail might have been a younger person who either has ...

Let me clarify: I do not want nice criticism, but I just hate getting messages that are not helpful but downright mean. I did not want this to be a ...

Yes, I do understand every ones point "It's a harsh world, grow the F*** up" what have you. Well when I get paid for some one tearing my stuff apart ...

Thank you for your comments. How ever this was a free verse. Truthfully I think context is nothing. It does flow well and grammar is nothing without a real good ...

indention's aren't there =/ sorry all.

I hope you all can find out I am responding to both of my newest friends that helped me. I have just noticed something...this is the first draft of my ...

Classy, Wow. I cannot thank you enough for your in depth input on the chapter. I wrote it when I was 17. I lost it and now, 4-5 years later, ...