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Jade: She got up quickly when Tyrel entered the room, concern etched on his face. Jade's mind flitted back to the conversation about Billy Cook and Jack's fast departure. Something ...

Jade: Jade looked up in surpirse when Jack's horse went galloping past; BJ wasn't following. Jade bit her lip, knowing that something had gone on between the two. She sighed ...

Hey EmmVeePi, This is pretty good. The intro was awesome; great job characterizing his walking stick and sending the reader into the direction you want them to be thinking while ...

Name:Riley Age: 16 Gender: Female Personality: Loves listening to her Ipod and tagging along with Jaime. The only true "girly-girl" of the family. Likes to do her nails and hair ...

Jade: Jade waited for about fifteen minutes, but her patience wore thin and finally she trotted off in the direction she had came. She rounded the bend, but before she ...

So, I'm writing a book and I've got the basic story outline and character sketches. I want to start writing it down, and once I get past the intro it ...

Hey Bokkaku! This was really cute. I understood it after I read the spoiler. It's not really that obcious that it is a toddler, but once the reader finds out, ...

Jade: Jade turned away at the kiss, but not before she saw a tension cross his face at the mention of Billy Cook. She stored the incident away in her ...

Jade: At that moment, the waitress came around to their table and took their orders. Jack and BJ ordered the daily special, and Jade ordered the beans and sowbelly. They ...

Jade: Jade grinned, her prediction of a free meal had come true, but she noticed the abrubt change in subject. She didn't blame him. She picked up the menu and ...

Jade: For the second time that day, Jade entered the restaurant, this time sitting out in the open. Nobody would bother messing with a bounty hunter. Jade had learned that ...

Jade's eyes flicked to the man on the horse and wondered if he could be trusted. The bounty hunter evidently saw her distrust and said, "Don't worry miss Jade, he's ...

Jade headed down the stairs once again, grabbing her bags and leaving the room for good. She needed to find a place to stay that was farther away from town. ...

Come on, guys! Don't let this one die!!! This could be an awesome storybook! Keep posting. Vet

Sorry guys! I completely forgot I was doing this storybook. I will post another character, but I don't have time right now. I'll do it sometime today. Vet