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Name: Ray Shadow Age: 36 Race: White Gender: Male Appearance: Tall, 6'2. Brown, clean-cut hair. Strong features and square jaw. Large green eyes. Wears blue jeans, leather vest, blue shirt, ...

Jade: Shoot she thought. She tried not to let the surprise register on her face. "Maybe I will call one of my 'little friends'", she said, "But maybe there is ...

I'm going to go ahead and add a new character. I'll post later on.

Jade: She hesitated; it was obvious that this girl was up to no good, but she had no right to kill her. Suddenly, she knew where she'd seen this girl. ...

Jade: Startled, Jade hastily pulled out her gun and held it steady at the sobbing woman in front of her. She looked to be an older woman, and with tears ...

Jade: When Jade reached the porch, she saw the BJ was not the only one coming to the ranch. A cloud of dust was rising behind the farmhouse. She ran ...

Hey! You've got an interesting plot here. The idea that you have to be qualified to be a villianess is interesting. :) This could be a great story, but I ...

Jade: Jade was guided to her room by Pippa and she plopped her bag down onto her bed. She'd seen Jack speed by with another man, whom she was assuming ...

Brava! Brava! *claps handss vigorously* Loved the second part! Like I said, the two frineds have lots of character. Good job describing them, but what does Rune look like? Anyway, ...

Hey! Love the story. I think the overall lplot is good, classic rescue the princess, but if you continue the story, I'd advise you to try to be really original ...

***Umm, you could ive me odd jobs around the ranch; fixing fences and cleaning stalls and the like. I could handle horses or cattle as well. You choice***

Jade: Jade stood awkwardly on the porch. She glanced over at Matt. She wondered what he was doing here. "So, where do you want me?" she asked Pippa. "I can ...

***Sorry! I figured that Pippa would still be kinda grumpy at Tyrel. My bad. :oops: *** Jade: She sighed and decided to drop the issue. "Alright," Jade said. "I'll make ...

Jade: She thought for a moment. Back at home she had handled a lot of the outside chores and the animals. "Well," she said, "I'm pretty good outside; you know, ...

The sky is falling! ~Chicken Little