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Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Slim: He entered the cafeteria and glanced around. The usual assortment of heroes were there, but there were two specific groups that Slim was looking for: those who led and ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: A Compulsive Disorder of the Obsessive Variety
Hey! Good job writing this piece. The words were well placed and easy to read. I liked the description of the line on the chalkboard being red. Just a good ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: DT: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Ok, sounds good. Vet
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Slim Parker: He stormed down the hallway, annoyed at Copper. How could he have been that stupid? He'd forgotten to check his sleeves after practicing with his web that morning. ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: DT: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Mattster: My character doesn't actually attend the academy; he's planning to attack it. Is that allowed? If not, I'll change my earlier posts. Thanks! Vet
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Do You YWS?
Yes! I do Yell When Slapped! Ha. :) :) :)
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: The Fairy's Gift (Edit I)
Hey! First, awesome storyline. It was a pretty good idea overall, and the way you made the fairies not little, but people-sized was very imaginative. It was a little bit ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: DT: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Probably someone else, because he is in disguise. Let's say that we knew each other in the academy before, but Nick did something that made Slim mad. That turned Slim ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: DT: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Bman, Slim is basically trying to find a weakness in you. He and a few other villians are conspiring to attack the academy while the new students are just enrolling. ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
SLIM PARKER He stood across from the academy, studying the many different heroes. He was searching for one in particular, a boy named Nick Copper. Rage seethed inside Slim at ...
Feb 28, 2009 -
Re: DT: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
I'll bring you in, boltageman. Vet
Feb 28, 2009 -
Re: The Cowboys
Jade: Byrne said nothing, but turned away silently and headed for the barn. Jade siged in relief and headed toward the house to see who this mysterious visitor was. *Hope ...
Feb 28, 2009 -
Re: DT: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Name: Slim Parker Gender: Male Age: 17 Ancestor: Peter Parker (Spiderman) Alliance: Villian Appearance: Red hair of his mother, slim but strong body. Green eyes, horseshoe shaped scar on his ...
Feb 27, 2009 -
Re: The Cowboys
Jade: Jade glanced behind her to see who it was that Byrne saw. There, just approaching the ranch, was a large man on a black horse. Whoever it was, he ...
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: The Cowboys
Jade: Ok, all she needed to do was prove her "capableness" and she would have all the money she needed. Sadie's back was turned toward her. If only she could ...
Feb 25, 2009
