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Rey: Rey stood alone in the clearing, wondering why he'd just shared his deepest secret with a girl he didn't really even know. He sighed. He doubted she would say ...

Rey: The way the girl referred to men and the spite that was directed at him had convinced him that it was safe for him to reveal his secret. "I ...

Rey: Duties done, Rey weaved in and out of the men toward the border of the forest. He hoped to avoid conversation with anyone. He managed to get out of ...

*Roger roger, Jaden. I'll do that.* Rey. As they rounded the border of the forest, Rey's eye was caught by a young girl standing in the trees. His curiosity aroused, ...

Wow, I loved it! Especially the first two lines. The picture of wind "dancing across your face was a beautiful picture! But I didn't get the "I am the melody" ...

Rey: Rey's horse, Lightning, galloped in time with the herd, his muscled body rippling underneath Rey. Rey reveled in the feeling of freedom he gained when patrolling the lands. He ...

NAME: Rey Loamsdown GENDER: Male AGE: 15 RACE: Hobbit/human APPEARANCE: Short, about 4'5, but taller than most hobbits. Wiry and well-muscled. Shoulder-length, blond, curly hair. Wears leather tunic a

Yes! Totally awesome idea. I can't post now, but I Will post a profile by tomorrow. Vet

Hey oneeyedunicornhunter, First off, well done. The imagery was great. There were a few parts I really liked, such as: I think about waves pushing and pulling, The horizon decked ...

:) Ok, cool. Vet

How many characters are we allowed to have? Just curious. Vet

Slim: He watched as Aislara silently rose and left the room. He looked at Eden. "What's her problem?" he asked. "Maybe her life is being intruded by an annoying brat ...

Slim: The guy was suspicious, he could tell. He'd best be on his guard. He looked over to the girl, Aislara, she said her name was. "So you guys been ...

Hey Mattster, Sorry about that. Quick Q, when we level up, is it subtle, or does the character acually feel his power increasing? One more thing, the post wouldn't delete, ...

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