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Re: Annabelle's Box
This is a really awesome piece. I was so curious to know what was in the box! You did an awesome job reeling and hooking your audience. You've got a ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Friendship (revised)
F riendship is precious, once in a lifetime, R arer than rare, gained only by time I mmortal, lasts forever E ven through time, it cannot sever N ever perfect, ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Children are Apt to Forget to Remember pt 1 of 2
Hey! Great story you've got going on here! OK, let's start at the beginning. There are many things in this world that go unnoticed. There are many people who seem ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: What should I have for supper next week?
Subway sUbway suBway subWay subwAy subwaY
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Hallelujah
Wow, this is really cool. I am a Christian, so I appreciate this poem. Angels have always fascinated me, and I thought it was cool how you had an angel ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: The Letter.
I don't think he was being wimpy. I think he was being a true man. The fact that he's sharing this story with his mother says that he has a ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: Waiting to Exhale
This is a beautiful poem. I really liked how you used a box, like how we think in a box. The only thing I saw that you could really improve ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: Courage's Courageous Adventure (edited)
Rated PG for mild violence Chapter One: Stolen! My brown mane rippled in the wind as my hooves pounded on the soft earth. The weight of my 14-year-old master, Jenny, ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: The Elements
I really like your story. You've got me hooked. I honestly don't see anything wrong with it. I saw how you've been improving each chapter by listening to the constructive ...
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: Nevermind
Great story! I really liked how you made Holly so innocent, e.g. Not knowing what a seat belt was, reacting as she did to the Tranquilizer gun. I also liked ...
Apr 3, 2008