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The poem is too plastic it's like i heard it all before but the style that it is written in isn't used much lately, so that you can bring it ...

I wanted to get going with my writing, so I typed in "young writers" and found this site. I love it, by the way.

Hey, this is an awesome poem. I am a believer, and I think you are doing an awesome job of living out your beliefs. Back to your poem. I could ...

Bravo! This is a really good poem. It has awesome rhythm and sync. I think, though, The first letter of every line is supposed to be capitalized. I dunno for ...

I like this one! It was light and funny, and it made me giggle. Reminds me of my heart’s silent choke After I have taken a sip of a bitter ...

This is a beautiful poem. I really like this. It's sad, yet meaningful. I can't imagine how beautiful this would be with music. Great job!!

Hey! this is very natural and flowing. I really liked it! I think you could work on the punctuation and capitilazation Here's how I would put it. He was young ...

Wow, this is a very good piece! Your grammer is excellent, and you writing is fluent and colorful. I really really liked it. It pulled me in, and is very ...

Tis was super good! Your grammer and spelling are very good, and your story plot is wonderful. I absolutely cannot wait to read the next chapter. I agree with Azila ...

Hey! This is a really interesting poem. I think you should put some paragraphs, though. Let me show you a few things I've noticed. Her Mast moaning and billowing, expressing ...

Alright, I need to know a few things, 1. Does this seem thrown together? 2. Does it seem to go 'off track'? 3. How is it? :D Crits welcome! I ...

Ok, thanks for the tip.

This is a great idea for a story. I think Penelope was a little too calm, but I like how you made her seem so brave. I love the descriptions ...

Oh My Gosh, I love the last one. Looks like you've got a career in photography coming!

Awesome Awesome Awesome! This one almost made me cry. It's so sad how quickly children lose their innocence. They should be able to keep it forever. I like how you ...