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Re: Movie Quotes
Friendly reminder: Please don't swear on this game.
Aug 27, 2008 -
Re: Movie Quotes
Okay here's the game: The point of this game is to talk only in movie quotes. Here are some rules: 1. No language or inappropriate comments. 2. It has to ...
Aug 22, 2008 -
Re: Only Speak in Song Titles
"Revelation" --- Third Day
Aug 22, 2008 -
Re: Joy and Glory
Our talents are to us A way to gain attention; We dance, we paint, we play beautiful music Yet all perform for motivations that differ. Some people perform To give ...
Aug 15, 2008 -
Re: A Little Murmur
Dang, you wrote that in math? Nice job. Umm, I think you did a very good job writing this.. although I'd hate to see you grade in math. :? I ...
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
Known for loving the Eragon book series. (I love those too!)
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: Sapphire - elf story (temp. title-still open to suggestions)
Hey HorseFreak, I thought I'd crit your story. Okay, first the nitpics, but before I start, just remember that it's your story and just because someone tells you to change ...
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
I had to check his profile. BigBadBear is known for writing adventure/thriller stories. Also for his cool name.
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: Baker's Dozen
1. Demeter 2. Sam 3. Jabber 4. thunder_dude7
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: Summer [rewrite...or revised??]
Hey Horsez! First, I'll commend you for trying to improve your work. I haven't read the first version yet, but I'll crit this. As far as spelling and grammar go, ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Brisingr (Eragon 3) Spoiler
I loved the Eragon books!!! (Although the movie definitly didn't live up to the books). I think he probably meets a God because he's, like the most legendary of all ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Anyone seen the Indiana Jones movie 'The crystal skulls'
I thought it was actually a pretty good movie, but it was weird. Especially the psyco sword lady. It was cool, but I thooght it was wierd because it was ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: As the Seasons Change
As I watch the seasons change, I see the fall approaching Its autumn fingers reaching, For the nearest maple tree. As I watch the seasons change, Winter's gusts and winds ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: Cold love
Hello! You reviewed my poem, so I thought I'd review one of yours. First, some nit piks. my ripped arms This is a pretty intense line. He loves me, he’s ...
May 19, 2008 -
Re: Silence From Chicago
First off, I want to say this is a great storyline. You really captured the character's personality. You have great detail and did a good job describing the setting. First ...
May 13, 2008
