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  • Poetry » Science, Nature Re: Yellow + Black

    Thanks for your review and ideas!

    Sep 13
  • Poetry » Science, Nature Re: Yellow + Black

    Thank you for reading!

    Sep 13
  • Poetry » Science, Nature Re: Yellow + Black

    Thanks for your review and interpretation! I was trying to go for an observational tone lol

    Sep 13
  • Poetry » Nature, Narrative Re: Knock Knock

    Thank you for your review and ideas!

    Sep 12
  • Poetry » Nature, Narrative Re: Knock Knock

    Thank you so much for your input!

    Sep 12
  • Poetry » Nature, Narrative Re: Knock Knock

    Thank you so much for your feedback and ideas!

    Sep 12
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The perfect childhood

    Hi, This is a great piece! I love that is clear, concise, and gets the message across. My piece of advice would be to break apart your sentences. Some are ...

    Sep 7


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