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Hi, This poem is really cool! I love how you compare yourself as kid to who you are today. I also like how the end of the poem is uplifting ...

Hi, This is a great poem! I love how you incorporate recurring themes like free self-expression and not worrying about overshadowing others. This poem has a meaningful uplifting message that ...

Hi, This poem is super interesting and unique! I loved you used Shakespearean language in this poem, which gives it a unique musicality, and then gave us a translation. I ...

Hi, This is a really cool poem! I love your message of how we think we are free but we are really constantly under the influence and molding of our ...

Hi, This is great! I love how you are able to convey so much emotion in a short poem. I also think it's really cool how you used used formatting ...

Hi, I'm going to elaborate on my previous review. This is a great piece! I love that is clear, concise, and gets the message across. My piece of advice would ...

Hey, This is amazing! I think this realization about humanity's loss of empathy is one that is extremely important to discuss and yet no one wants to talk about it. ...

Hi deermoka, This is really well done! I love how you slowly build a picture of Erik's life. I would say to make sure to intentionally format your short story. ...