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Hi, I'm going to elaborate on my previous review. This is a great piece! I love that is clear, concise, and gets the message across. My piece of advice would ...

Hey, This is amazing! I think this realization about humanity's loss of empathy is one that is extremely important to discuss and yet no one wants to talk about it. ...

Hi deermoka, This is really well done! I love how you slowly build a picture of Erik's life. I would say to make sure to intentionally format your short story. ...