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Orion laughed. He could feel the wings beating beneath him, the air rushing past his face, the shouts below him: ‘You can’t go, Orion Nightsworth!’ and it was exhilarating. He ...

Ah, a story. Nitpicking it is! Okay, I started going through it and here is what I noticed: Your descriptions are confusing. 'I almost fell over a mountain, a river ...

Haha, I liked the ending. Obviously, your from Britain, who's language sounds so much better in situations like this than American... And yes, your tone is perfect, and the title, ...

Seems interesting so far... And for nitpicking: Bax looked into the trooper’s helmeted face Looking into a face? I might be wrong here, but it seems like a strange choice ...

I feel the same way, too, and this really touched me that someone else agreed with me. While America is clean, people have really forgotten what we had to do. ...

I love this, it's amazing. I love how Dominique is real, like someone mentioned earlier. I can completely imagine him. And Damien is interesting, too, especially with the dangerous edge ...

Hahaha, love your name, by the way. :)

Hi! Well, my name is Vela, a sort of strange name, really, but I love it anyway. I'm 13 at the moment and I love writing. Duh. Hmm. What else ...