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Hey! I liked this. It was a powerful piece, I liked the way you structured it and it the reactions to a near death situation seem believable. I could really ...

:) Sounds interesting! I'll have to check out whatever stories you have when they come out.

:D I joined for the same reason. And being 99 is fine, I've seen that somewhere else... :) But still, :D Wow, I'm using a lot of smileys. Anyway, welcome ...

To answer your questions: Busters appearance is okay, but we didn't get much of it. We only got a snippet of Buster's looks, and thats only sight. Maybe Buster is ...

Haha, I loved this piece. You've liked much more interesting guys than me, but I suppose thats not saying much considering I'm younger and have liked the most boring guys, ...

About a year ago, when I was 12. I got hit with the Harry Potter bug, and wrote some was awful. Completely awful. I started writing original fiction when about ...

Oh, wow. I liked this piece.I can hear the characters voices in my head clearly. The descriptions were good, too. Your grammar-specifically with dialogue- could use some improvement, though, and ...

Oh, wow I liked this. I got my attention in the first couple words, and I never felt the urge to press the back button like I sometimes do. Your ...

Thanks, both of you. Nightfallwriter--I'll cut out the repetition of 'frustration.' For your comments: Anything that mentioned the Nightworths in history was re-recorded as the Moonshadows. Anyone who

Thanks, both of you. Nightfallwriter--I'll cut out the repetition of 'frustration.'

Thanks! I was so happy to see that you liked this. :) I know, right? I'm probably going to write a version where he was doesn't go insane...I was going ...

So, I have a problem with writing short stories that aren't just drabbles. I always tell myself to attempt to make the story be under 5000 words and actually feel ...

Hi Pink! If you have time, could you review this? It's a fantasy short story, about 7000 words long, and it's title is Light. Thanks!

I like this story, but I think it could have more feeling in it. She feels left out, go more in depth about it. She is shocked that she's died, ...

Oh, thats funny. We both submitted for that particular contest, and both of ours aren't particularly happy ones either. I'm going to go ahead and nitpick now. I didn't see ...