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Re: Revenge
Good adaptation of the topic. Very good connection. Only thing I felt was that your story was very straight forward: an intro, middle and ending. That is fine, but I ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: ...Make Lemonade
Brilliant! Held my attention through-out! Your timing and build up was just perfect for your satirical piece. I agree with trsai and you, your characters don't need any names at ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: View from above
Since I'm from India I have written this piece with a lot of orientation towards things based and happening commonly in India. I tried explaining some of the words in ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: I Am A Dreamer (The BIG Random Story Theme Contest Entry)
I agree it is a difficult topic, and I found both positives and negatives in your piece. Firstly, the fact that you were unsure of yourself when righting this piece ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: The Harp *Edit*
First of all, the tone of the poem is the same any piece on harp would have. Slow, steady, meaningful. The description of velvets, silks, and suits, though tactile, gives ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Painted mercenaries
Recently I was cleaning out the cupboard at my office and I found an old tape with the date “17th October 2005” written across it. I didn’t know what was ...
Jun 27, 2011
