vampirelover101

You did an awsome job in your writing.

i know i have a few spelling errors and purplepretzal she fell asleep and woke up in hevan

she fell dark into sleep ghost's and ghoul's shall forever reep quiet laying waching the sky clouds of gray wisping by forever she will stay awake waching sun form night ...

I like your piece. It's very good. But the one thing that consernes me is that you wrote about something to do with religion. I am a god lover to ...

this site is for writing pieces only sorry

I like it but it doesn't make sense. But you should still write. Your a very good writer. Your poem sounds really good like it sounds down to earth and ...

I love it! But the thing is you only used 1 punctuation mark. I think your poem is very good because it sounds mysterious and I like the rhymes that ...

I like the poem, but it doesn't make sense. Why r u staring at someon? I'm just asking. But other than that it was a good poem.

Great punctuation in your poem. I really liked how you described it. I think your a really good writer and you should keep up the good work. :D

When writing a new piece, be sure you write something creative. For example you could write something about how you feel and give it a twist by being creative, such ...

The poem is good, but i think that maybe you shouldnt write about something that you really feel. But im not sure if it is your true feelings. other than ...

It was good, but the ending was a little vague to me. i think you need to elabarate more on that but other then that i really enjoyed it. keep ...

That poem was so good!!!!!!!!!!!! It showed how someone feels either it's you or not. Great use of rhymes to. I really could understand how a little girl or boy ...

I liked it

A simple tip is if ur writing a poem 2 try and ryhm it sounds really good