vampireacademyfreak3

haha i didnt realize this was chapter two................guess i got to go back and read chapter one

it was ok keep writing

its good but could use some improving

i love this! its sooooooo good keep writing

um i didnt get the ninja thing

i love the topic of the story and the way you wrote you've got great potential keep up the good work:)

i like that

the concept of your poem is very good but not always true

i like this

fear.........

very soulful

i like the story behind the poem

keep riting i can see that you've got potential

that is the best poem by far

pretty good topic theme