vampireacademyfreak3

Just let me start off by saying AWESOME! at first i read it and im like 'this is really good' then i seen your only 13. wow you have pure ...

Ok I think that the topic you choose was good but you have a few grammer mistakes here and there but one thing that confused me was where the train ...

I loved the topic that you choose to write on. At first I thought that you were reffering to sky sisters as the sun and the moon and then you ...

Through the days and through the nights, she dreams of him, her valentine. Her heart beats once, her heart beats twice, her heart will break when she doesnt see him ...

I like the fact that your poem is short and simple but it got to the point and told us a story that left us to wonder. overall I enjoyed ...

you guys should probably read the prolouge to this if you have'nt already. Sorry for any grammer mistakes I was kinda in a hurry when I wrote this so........ thnx;)

chapter one The first thing I though at seven fifty five am was "Happy freakin birthday to me" Then I wanted to go back to sleep. In a couple hours ...

that was pretty amazing i liked the flow of it and where he story led you know how to keep the rythm going and that right there shows potential very ...

you have some potential to write keep getting at it.....i know you can improve good job :)

i can relate to your topic graet job:)

i agree with you ..............i know a couple atheists overall i liked the concept

"the scars on her wrist each one tells a different story" is my fav.............um im guessing shes emo?

that was good but if you wrote a little more and less nothings it would have been waaaaay better

i cant wait to read more...........i agree monopoly is pretty boring

i love special place is this cave like thing by our beach house