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Re: Offbeat Souls
l really liked your poem and the way you see the world as l right?This is the first piece i've ever seen by you and look forward to reading more ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Life in highschool
First off I wanna say l never laughed so hard in my life. l loved everything about it and as l read on l got lost in the story. l ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: the uprising
Never again will you ever believe, never again will you ever decieve. Masked by your hate and devilness inside, your love for him was always a disguise. Knowing it's possible ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Fatal Attraction
Okay so I had to google a couple words......LOL but overall I really........loved it! and believe me thats saying alot. you have a really nice flow that goes along with ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: the answer
He left that night his head held high, loving her with a sad goodybe. The pain eating at him day by day, no matter what the doctors would say. There ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: reincarnation
Never remembering their whole past lives, just the feeling of hope inside. The eyes that see right through her soul, the thoughts that sweep and wrap her whole. The future ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Regret
Wow! you are the best...lol I loved it and as I was reading it I couldnt help but feel like you were talking to a younger you...but then again that ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Taking Chances
OMG that was really good. As I was reading I felt like I was in a linkin park song... which is a good thing I hope! Can't wait to read ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Black Roses
So first I want to say welcome to yws and its a pleasure! Now down to the nitty gritty I read your other piece wishes and although it wasnt the ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Turn your back
I really liked the message that you were trying to get across to your sister. Although it's good that you write your feelings down telling your sister how you feel ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Dont leave
I would review this poem but you didnt write it so I dont see the point. the poem didnt really say where the girl was going or how long they've ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: A Scratch Beneath The Surface
WOW! that was pretty freakin amazing. I loved it. I espically liked the topic you choose to write about. I cant wait to read more of your work. :)
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: terrorist?
I've never been on a camel, I've never owned a nuclear weapon. I don't own a bulletproof vest, I don't bomb random communities. Yes I pray five times a day, ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: A final farewell
I just wanna start off by saying that I love the topic that you chose to write about. Just know this, my dear, that whenever 'tis night And the moon ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Options
HIYA! I liked how your prolouge left readers wanting more. You started it off with two people talking and left us wondering where exactly is she going? overall I like ...
Jun 9, 2011
