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UH.....somebody say AWESOME! that was by far one of the best pieces the I have read about life in general. I guess your trying to say that you may think ...

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Welcome to YWS! your really like going to love this site where everyone is honest and welcoming and as far as i'm concerened.............never mean. Posting your work up you shouldn't ...

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HELLO first off I want to say that I think that your english is brillant and if you post your book up i'm sure alot of people would read it ...

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If you need help with anything feel free to ask me as well .............I dont mind giving you some insight on how things work around here.......I am also new but ...

Wow ............that poem was short, simple and sad ..........quiet frankly it described the way I have been feeling for a while. I really loved it :D So keep up the ...

So ok ...........You told a story of a runaway in a poem and her dad or boyfriend ends up finding her because shes dead and hes dead so thats why ...

I didn't really consider this a poem more or rather it being your thoughts on paper which is fine. You should tell him how you feel ...........who knows maybe he ...

I really loved the pictures that you took. They looked like they were done by a professional ......... like something you would see in a magizine. you had a good ...

I rolled my eyes and walked out the door. I walked to school. I took the alley way to school. I felt an erie feeling. I walked around corner. The ...

There was no flow to your poem but I got the message that you were trying to get across. Finals arean't really a big chunk of your grade I mean ...

Wow the first line of your story had me hooked and then I couldnt stop reading. Only once did I stop reading did I realize how long chapter one was. ...

um so your poem was alright but as l read along l couldnt help but feel like some of the flow in the poem was forced......l dont know but thats ...