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  • Poetry » General, Dramatic
    Re: Black

    as said by @jazzydracula and @redwritinghood I dont think Ive ever thought so much about the colour black it is my favourite colour and probably alot of other peoples to ...

    Dec 2, 2014

  • Art » Other, Narrative
    Re: Dreams

    Hi the first im going to say is GREAT PIECE and I take my hat of to you Ell15 i dont know if that meant to mean ellis but if ...

    Nov 29, 2014

  • Art » Health, General
    Re: Kindle your creativity

    Hello this poem was good and had a very powerful meaning behind it I hate when people steal my ideas and Im sure you do to thats why you wrote ...

    Nov 29, 2014

  • Art » Horror, General
    Re: Her

    I agree with ferrumcorde it is very hard to review something so small yet the two lines that you had actually held alot of emotion and description which is actually ...

    Nov 29, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy
    Re: Princess's are Not Pretty.

    Hello valdez here for a review The story was good and got me hooked from the start of the of the first chapter and I couldnt stop reading till the ...

    Nov 29, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction
    Re: The Before - 00

    Hi valdez here for a quick review The decription in the story was suberb and it gave me a very beautiful image in my head but I didnt really understand ...

    Nov 29, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Moonshine

    This poem had a good idea behind it that couldve gone a long way but i feel that it was to short and I didnt really get the picture of ...

    Nov 29, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Re: The Pixie And The Giant (Part 1)

    your story is really good and got me hooked the moment i read the title it is a very interesting concept on which to base a story and i think ...

    May 13, 2014

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: A night in hell...

    its really good so far sounded more like a poem then a intro but still a bloody good poem there was 1 part i didn't get they were (The water ...

    May 13, 2014


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