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untalentedwriter

  • Art & Photography Re: The nature of the city

    Ha ha! Those are some really big pictures! They are pretty good they just need some resizing and the quality needs to be a little better.

    May 8, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Flower (photo)

    Cool picture. It's really bright and happy,But like said before the quality of the piece could be better.

    May 8, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Little If In Space

    I have to agree with the others your poem was so good. The vocabulary you used was perfect and described everything perfectly. I really liked the flow and how everything ...

    May 8, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: A Single Rose

    It was so good. I really liked the tittle. The first line of the story was my favorite. :)

    May 8, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Abandoned Places You'll Never See

    I loved the eighth picture. All the pictures were good. They were so creepy. I Also loved the door pictures. :)

    May 8, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Tired

    I really liked your poem.I loved the second stanza.

    May 8, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Twisted

    You told her you loved her and like a fool she believed you. You told her to trust you and like a child she trusted. You asked for everything and ...

    May 8, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Darling, Drink

    Awesome poem. The tittle really caught my attention.I loved the third stanza. :D

    May 8, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Vintage Mickey Mouse

    He is so adorable. I love Micky Mouse! He is accutaly a really good drawing. :D

    May 8, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Sketch of a guy ^_^

    This is a really good drawing. And his hair is excellent. :)

    May 8, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Heard In What He Feared

    I really liked this poem. I loved how the words rhymed. Though I also have to agree with the the first comment about it sounding kinda forced, but all in ...

    May 8, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Beach mixed media

    The colors are really pretty. And the textures are really cool looking! :)

    May 7, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Good Enough

    Hello! your lyrics are really good. I love the whole flow of the words. :D

    May 7, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: This is For Them

    She stands in the rain waiting for the bus. her tears running down her face and mixing with the puddles she's running from her past. She wants to get away ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Some pics :)

    The first picture is really pretty. The middle ones pretty good. The last one is so cute! :D

    May 6, 2010


Even strength must bow to wisdom sometimes.
— Rick Riordan, The Lightning Thief