untalentedwriter

I have to say I really liked it. The writing I thought was excellent. I have to agree with the comment about how some of the lines didn't really fit. ...

Well hello! I agree with the comments above. And you should start to review. It's quite fun and it helps other writers learn about what they need to work on ...

I was also wondering if this poem was about snow white. I liked how everything in the poem flowed. It had a pretty Nice rhythm to it. I have to ...

Well first off Hello. I have to say I really liked this poem. It was different and intriguing.The tittle instantly caught my attention. I like the last stanza the best! ...

a little girl sits in her room. she's hidden under the bed she doesn't want him to find her. she can hear his footsteps as he walks into the room. ...

I have to agree with the first comment. I didn't really get how everything worked. I did like your choose of words. Like irksome! I did like the repeating of ...

She tapped her pencil on the desk and stared at the clock waiting for the day to end. she wanted to be home instead of there were he was. A ...

This poem was so beautifully! It had so much emotion. I loved how you made everything flow. Excellent job!! :D

I agree with the other comments. The last stanza needs a bit of work. I loved the first stanza it made me smile for some reason! I also liked the ...

I liked this poem because it was different. All the words flowed quite well with each other. The poem made you want to read it. I read it about four ...

The poem was Okay, but I have to agree with the other comments. The poem needs to be a bit more imaginative. The readers need to want to read the ...

I liked your poem! It was inspirational in a way!

Cool poem. And I have to agree I didn't think it was preachy at all! :)

How sweet!

A pounding heart Beating in time With the ticking of the silence The wide green eyes filled with fear Glistening with tears The tears fall down her face And wash ...