unraveled

Wow, this was a wonderful piece, springrain2693 ! I really liked the ironic twist with her not considering herself a baby yet not willing to act like an adult. The ...

Hi OverEasy! I think this is one of the cutest stories I've ever read so far. All the grammatical errors have been taken care of so I'll just review. :D ...

She would never tell the police, because she would never be safe. I don't want to give away too much so, look out for part two! :D

Oh, yes! I did mean descendants, thanks. Lol

Aw, this was really sad! :cry: It was really well-written, though and I didn't catch any typos really. I think you could add some more details about what she feeling ...

The impact of his hand across my face sent me to the ground. I wasn't afraid of him anymore, a thing like was almost routine now. The anger he built ...

This is a story I keep rewriting, trying to improve. Crits would be lovely, sorry if there's any typos! --- “We’re not making any progress,” Judge Matheson’s eyes expressed annoyance ...

Well, I love to read fiction and old literature. I'm not really a fan of science fiction or fantasy...but I dont judge a book by its cover. (:

Why do you want to weigh the words?

swell!

"There's no need for name calling. She's said her peace and that's all there is to it." -Sweet Home Alabama

I'm quite curious about all this Twilight madness, I'm debating whether or not I should invest my time into the books..

Hey titorelli, This was a good plot overall. There were some grammatical and spelling errors, but I think mizz-iceberg caught them all. I agree that you should go through the ...

Brighter than Sunshine in your pants! She Will be Loved in your pants! :lol: Fat bottomed girls in your pants! Erfquake in your pants! Hehe, I like this game!

Woo, go class of 2010! I'm thrilled that high school is almost over, I'm quite overwhelmed by the pointless drama. :roll: