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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Angels of the Heights

    Thank you so much, don't worry about the lateness, the quality made up for it! Very good feedback and I will be sure to remember it as I begin to ...

    Nov 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: TFoA - Chapter 11

    ah OK my bad for forgetting about that:( well anyways hope to see this chapter soon, tho in this time of green room over saturation the price of posting is ...

    Oct 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: TFoA - Chapter 10

    ah ok i get what you mean. And cool to know that eyes turn blue as a side effect of magic!

    Oct 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Angels of the Heights

    Well, unfortunate to know that you did not find this to your liking, thanks for stopping by anyways.

    Sep 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Terashar- The First Cycle (Edited)

    Thank you for taking the time to read and review, you make some good points about the plot. The way that I handled that may have come off as a ...

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Science Fiction Re: When the little kids get spaceships (Edited)

    Good to hear your thoughts on this, you definitely make some points worth considering. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: TFoA - Chapter 7

    No problem!

    Jul 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 9: Zakashi's Master (Part I)

    Cool, a manga of your work would be interesting to see.

    Jul 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 9: Zakashi's Master (Part I)

    No problem man, it has been a lot of fun to binge review it all, I will get to the next batch soon, and then hopefully book 1 as well!

    Jul 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: A Hierarchy of Needs

    Thank you so very much for you super detailed review, this really was of use. Its good to know that you thought I handled the character's sexual orientation well, that ...

    Jul 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: A Hierarchy of Needs

    Thanks for the review, and glad you liked it. Its good to know the SF elements were enjoyable/interesting but not overpowering.

    Jul 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: A Hierarchy of Needs

    Thank you for taking the time to read and review, I am pleased to hear that you got a "old world" sf feel from it. I will take your comments ...

    Jul 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 7: King

    I plan to!

    Jul 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 6: Land of Magic

    Thank you so very much, I am glad you find at least some of this input to be of use:)

    Jul 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 9: Zakashi's Master (Part II)

    No problem! Hope this helps:)

    Jul 12, 2014


As a former (and rather excellent) liar herself, Aru knew that, sometimes, speaking the truth felt like wrenching a thorn out of your side. But doing the opposite meant pretending it wasn't there. And that made every single step ache. It was no way to live.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality