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Unpublishedperson here to review chapter 12! Lets just get the nitpicks out of the way first. I hate seeing Lydia so upset I thought this was maybe a bit too ...

First things first, I think it is good that you are dealing with Lydia's reaction to her blindness like this early on. Its better that you do this now that ...

Hey there, unpublishedperson here to review! I have been waiting for this one for a while, so thanks for publishing! Of course, it would be wonderful if you could keep ...

Hey, unpublished here to review! This looks like a very interesting novel that I am sad I have not discovered previously, and I will be checking out previous chapters if ...

This was a intriguing opening, very brief but with a lot of subtext and information. This seemed like the type of prologue that has a lot of clue that will ...

Hey there, unpublishedperson here to review! It has been a while since I have done anything on this website, so excuse my reviewing skills being a bit rusty and all. ...

Hey there, unpublishedperson here to review Chapter 9, where it looks like shit is getting real! Daniel thinks for a few seconds. “Yeah, you kind of do.” He says, nodding. ...

Hey there, unpublishedperson here to review, so sorry that I did not get to this sooner. So, for the most part a good chapter. It was nice to see Lydia ...

Hey there, unpublished person here to review! First, some nitpicks: just around the next curve I would like you to specify a bit more here maybe? like it seemed like ...

Unpublishedperson here to review chapter 7! This will be the final chapter that I am reviewing for a while, I will be back from vacation in a few days and ...

Unpublishedperson here to review chapter 6! Boy, I sure am on a roll here with these reviews! Just this, and chapter 7, and then I will have 5-9 down! Then ...

Unpublishedperson here to review chapter 5, I will in order be doing 6 and 7, then do 1-4 if all goes according to plan. some of the army’s best of ...

Ok, to review part 2 for continuity! So, nitpicks first. “Well there used to be a special class that I tough personally of about thirty students, but since… since the ...

Unpublishedperson here to review, sorry that I am basically going back in time here, but its just easy for me that way. (makes the task less daunting) So, lets start ...

So I guess that I better review this part, now that I review Part 2! I was impressed by the opening of this chapter, even though I did not know ...