unmarkedterritory

Really powerful work...that is a super tough subject that you executed extremely well. You kept a really great back and forth motion with the mother and child. The fabrication and ...

I find the best poems are when you look upon a situation in a person or object least likely to be a "significant" point of view. WELL DONE! Amazing angle ...

Raw and powerful! Dramatic poem for sure! I really enjoyed the way you structured your poem. The stanza size was really ideal for effective pausing and creating tension in your ...