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Re: I Once Knew A Man (Boom ba bang)
This song is supposed to be a story told by a friend or a close relative of the man, hence why I put, "This is what he said" as the ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: short story brainstorm (Gran Torino inspired)
Thankyou for the very descriptive review :D I used "booming" and "silence" together because I was confused if whether or not I wanted to make this into a poem or ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Hidden Tears
When I wrote that line: Until it rains or when no one hears I tried to say that I can only cry when it rains, because at that time, my ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Loss of Self
Yeah.... Lmao xD I know. It was a bad choice of rhyming. I was singing it one day and I thought that it would work depending on how you pronounce ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Loss of Self
Thankyou for the feedback. The "of" mistake was a typo that I forgot to fix. Lol. Thankyou for pointing it out to me. And I will change the lyrics to ...
Sep 1, 2011