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Short story finished 12/7 MEMENTO MORI There was blood permanently ingrained under my fingernails, a symbolic reminder of my occupation. A scarlet letter marking me as one of the dregs ...

Hi...Um, yeah. I'm supposed to be introducing myself. I'm Samantha, but please call me Sammy because the only people that ever call me Samantha are teachers, and only when I'm ...

Writer's block put into poetry...that's fantastic. The sort of depressing humor that speaks to the irritable author inside us all. This is great, great stuff. You might want to pay ...

Wow...very awesome. The grammar is lacking in parts, but others have already gone into individual mistakes, so I'm sure you know that. It's almost lyrical and very emotional. Sort of ...

It's good, but I'd suggest cutting out some of the description. Try to rewrite this entire thing using a set number of adjectives, and with more paragraph breaks.