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Hi, Sarah. Can you review my most recent story? Link: Thanks!

As far as I know, it involves taking a knife, or in a more modern setting, a scalpel, and peeling off the entire layer of flesh, skin, and hair from ...

1. The kind with cookie dough and caramel in it. I have no idea why, I just like that kind of ice cream. 2. Biggest pet peeve is grammatical errors ...

Marijuana--weed--is a relaxant. It makes you feel very spaced out, and slow, like you're moving through molasses. I've used it a couple of times, but it makes you eat like ...

--Another one found in the annals of one of my many USB drives. I'm told it's disturbing, but tell me what you think. The Monster is back. But I’ve always ...

Having just read the prologue, the first chapter is much better, although far too short. I'd cut out the labels if I were you--it comes off as a cheap thrill, ...

It's a good concept, but it feels rushed. This is a six year old, so the emotional content isn't going to be quite as in depth as an older child ...

=) I have a bulletin board where I'm going to keep the rejection letters so I can put them in a scrapbook later. And rambling is awesome--I ramble all the ...

First chapter of novel #2. In progress. ********** —San Francisco, Cyber café. (30 minutes) It started as a bad joke. Well, if you want to be technical, it started when ...

Talk about creepy squared. Some spots are slightly unclear, but I love it. It seems a little like it was originally a much longer story that parts were cut out ...

It's a little repetitive, almost like you ran out of ideas and wanted it to take up more space. No offense meant. It's not bad, and I like it, don't ...

Ah, questions are fine, but there sure are a lot of them. Okay--peanut19, I do like Flyleaf, but I don't have the new album yet. I picked the title memento ...

A lot of this was cut out and revised in the final version. I would have posted that, but the computer crashed last week and it disappeared. This was the ...

Wow, y'all ask a lot of questions. I just checked back. Um..yeah, questions. I don't have a favorite book, but I find intense enjoyment in novels from the earlier 1900s. ...

I'm an atheist that was raised in a semi-religious house with a Mormon grandma. Nothing is more irritating than when a religious person preaches at me and tells me that ...