undeadbunnie

this was sorta interesting and some parts were well written, it was sweet “Snow.” this bit was a little confusing, i thought the guy had gone nuts and was blurting ...

Think of a place where age is not a factor, Where hills and lakes can be made in the blink of an eye, Where wonderful and unique creatures live And ...

hi this was pretty good but, like Esther Sylvester said, you need to make the MC a little more likable. She has a strong voice, but she seems too, well, ...