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Hi. Well, I'm a HUGE Harry Potter fan and I have to say, this is pretty hilarious. To counter Navita, I think it's funny BECAUSE it's so this-could-never-happen-in-a-million-years. Oh, and ...

Chelarose, Overall, I loved it! :) The only thing that bugged me was the paragraphs. Personally, I prefer writing with smaller paragraphs than you used. About halfway through longer ones, ...