ultraviolet

Hey there! Okay, so overall this is nice. It sets a good tone, and the overall effect is, I think, what you were going for. But obviously there are some ...

Amazing what a little editing can do, eh? You may think that the edits didn't do much, but immediately I could see the difference - overall, this can across as ...

LOGAN LERMAN! -------------------- I DIDN'T KNOW YOU COULD DRAW! (Yes, this needed two headers; I couldn't choose. xD) 1. His (my) right eye has a little less definition than the ...

1 and 2: I don't really have complaints on these. They're really good, though I can't say how they look compared to the original. My only comment would be the ...

Hey! First of all, this is really good, sixth grade or otherwise. I can only imagine how you'd improved since then. Though, I do have a couple of comments on ...

Fluff.

He first saw her at the state park, staring past the cliffs that led to the wide old river, and he knew that she wasn't happy. There was something in ...

Write a poem centered around the narrator's mood, which can't be happy, sad, angry, lustful, or content.

Wait, I'm on X, aren't I? Sorry 'bout that. I'll change my post. Xenophobia: Xenophobia; they sneak up on you like Xenon, like xanthopterin in butterfly wings. X-rated, they should ...

How dare you Stand up against the crowd Scream in the silence Curse out the priest How dare you Smile as you're mutilated Sing as you're held captive Dream as ...

Smilie

Death

Round

Point.

King.