ultraviolet

Hi! So, I really liked this! My only thing is how God acts. He seems short-tempered, controlling, and somewhat of a perve. No offense. But isn't he supposed to be ...

Actually, the ending was one of my favorite parts. It shows that not only does she see--OK, read--the money motivations of people, she did something to change it. It shows ...

Hi! OK, so I think I fixed most of the mistakes you guys pointed out. Maddy- I put in what happened to the ring. I have plans to describe her ...

Actually, yeah. Dex Reemer is narrating the story for everyone. I thought I made that clear in the prologue, but I guess I didn't. Do you have an idea how ...

Penelope-- If I were dancing with someone watching, then no matter how I was dancing I would be dancing like someone was watching because someone was watching. It is not ...

Emily woke up in the morning to the sound of someone pounding on her door . Drowsily, she looked at her watch. Eight thirty-seven. There were three tiny little letters ...

Looks like I'll be your reviewer for today! Red = Corrections Blue = Things I like Bold = Comments Young feet trotting towards the small iron gates. Big feet leading ...

You know you're a nerd when your idea of a well-spent Friday night is searching the internet and YWS for ways to improve your writing. hehe :P

Hey! I was going to review, but I didn't get all the way through. Not because it isn't good--it is--but because it would be really hard to review so much. ...

Hey! Mind reviewing the first part of my new novel "The Ringbearers"? Here's the link. Thanks! loveness, ultraviolet

Hey! Mind reviewing the first part of my novel? Here's the link. Thanks! loveness, ultraviolet

Blake Anika came over and hugged me, the little cutie. Ester made an attempt at small talk, but other than her nobody made any sort of response. Lovely. "Um... OK," ...

Hey. My name’s Dex Reemer. Not really. The reason I don’t dare give my real name is simple: I’m dead. Or I will be once someone finds out who I ...

I was just wondering this today. Thanks! :)

'Ello there! I'll be your reviewer for today. :mrgreen: Blue = Things I liked Red = Corrections Bold = Comments Slowly I sat up, holding my aching head. I felt ...