ultraviolet

Here to review as requested!! :) One thing first. Why did you put your story in quotes? It was unnecessary a kind of an eye sore. I'd suggest taking away ...

Blake We were lucky. Very lucky. Very, very, very, very, VERY, lucky. The girl that spotted us, she was a runaway. Longed for freedom and independence; everything that us winged ...

OK, so, a couple things. One: for talking about this we really should have a DT. Unless we have on already and I just don't know about it. That way ...

Here to review as requested!! :) One quick note first. Jokesters Threat and Deception are chapters in the same book, right? So the novel page should have the novel's title, ...

Seriously?! SWEET! I so didn't even see that. :)

K so I found time. Name: Jackie Age: 9 (Sorry she's not a teen, but neither is Anika.) Appearance: Personality: Thinks she can do more than she can. Thinks like ...

I walked the arena looking for my prey--er... opponent. It was a giant bowl of dirt with ring after ring after ring carved out of its side. It reminded me ...

I LOVE the Harry Potter references!! Plus, the Deathly Hallows is my favorite, followed by the Half-Blood Prince. hehe :P

Actually, I posted it saying that she kind of zoned back into normal, though everybody thought that she could zombie-ify at any time. But you should be good for mow.

Blake WAIT!! I mentally screamed. Such a small child could put us all in danger. "Wait!" I called out in the sickeningest sweet voice I could muster. "Can I show ...

Blake "Hey," Michel said to the girl. "Want to fly? Or are you too chicken?" He was crazy. "What the heck are you doing? Are you insane?!" I hissed at ...

Blake Michel wrapped his arms around my back, pulling me closer. I put my arms around his neck. I could feel his soft lips on mine and for an instant ...

Blake I walked with Michel. It was nice to get away. To just... go. No worries, just walking. He walked with one arm around my shoulders; there were some perks ...

Here to review, Neep! (And yes, I did just call you Neep. :shock: ) Red = Corrections Blue = Things I like Bold = Comments Hiya! It's Nepo again! This ...

Penelope-- The kind that everybody looks at, frowns, and shoves into the back of the cupboard. Hey, at least nobody'd eat me. Would you post on a character answer game?